Is this a horror story or science fiction?
So, there I was innocently spying (lurking) on Mr. Kashman’s blog. I was excited to see 66 comments on his new science project. But, imagine my HORROR when I spotted a mistake in the present perfect tense! And this after Mr. Roboto and the Freaky Tense iMovie worked so hard to teach all of you. Moreover, there is a FAN BOY without a comma separating two independent clauses. I’m shocked and discouraged. Nevertheless, I know that this would never happen on the English teacher’s blog. So, correct those two mistakes below for extra credit.
“That tag line does not live up to its reputation for I have seen that brats yes brats aka my sisters have dranken Juicy Juice.”

